being with with you was no game without you has always been a pain your beauty was like the morning sun
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being with with you was no game without you has always been a pain your beauty was like the morning sun
December 10, 2014 at 8:07 pm
Excellent start, Henry. Be careful that your rhyme does not create the tone of a limerick. I like the ‘morning sun’ line. Could you develop this imagery throughout your poem?
December 17, 2014 at 7:28 am
Sir I posted my sections c essay but all the work suddenly disappeared so I have to start again
January 2, 2015 at 4:26 pm
Hi Henry
Check your trash folder. If you go to ‘all posts’ on the dashboard screen, it should be there somewhere. It’s almost impossible to lose work on this system.